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      "[(CNN)--The cardinal rule of a criminal detection was carved in stone more than a century ago.] It is a capital mistake to theorize before you have all the evidence,..It biases the judgement." -Sherlock Holmes

        In the BBC Television series "Sherlock," Benedict Cumberbatch stars as Sherlock Holmes while Martin Freeman plays Dr. John Watson, an Afghanistan war veteran. Throughout the pilot episode, "A Study in Pink," director Paul McGuigan gives a modern twist to a classic novel, A Study in Scarlett, originally written by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. By modernizing the novel into a television series,screen writer Steven Moff creates a drama that introduces new themes and characters who the audience sees as easier to relate to the show back to the original "Sherlock."
        It is our belief that this particular episode fully exemplifies the cultural ideas normally unable to be communicated in a Victorian London time period. In Sherlock, not only are people of all backgrounds able to relate in one way or another, but also with this acception of cultural change, comes a greater understanding of the characters thus allowing the viewers a better insight of the "Sherlock world."


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